31 days: August 19, "At most, flowers"
Aug. 19th, 2005 11:21 pmDeWolfe Apts., on the Feast of St. John Eudes
Cutting it even more close. I'm in a verbose mood lately. Also, I think I grossly mischaracterized Mary and Colin here. Oh, will the desecration of childhood classics never end, etc., etc., etc.
A Reminder
Dedicated to
serendip, because Mary's voice really belongs to her Ginny
Mistress Mary, quite contrary, grown ever more eccentric with age. As a young lady of sixteen, with her hair up and her skirts long, she insisted on muddying her boots and the hem of her petticoats while walking on the moors on a damp Sunday morning--"I forgot the smell of growing things," she informed her distraught maid--and on picking locks to closed-off rooms, a skill she had acquired under Colin's tutelage, who in turn had learned it at boarding school.
"Miss Mary," Colin said teasingly, as he walked into her sitting room--she was now old enough to have such little luxuries, although it must be admitted that she spent very little time sitting in it--without knocking. He hardly paused at the sight of his cousin sprawled out on the floor examining seeds with a magnifying glass. "I hear that you've taken up natural history."
"One would wonder at your lack of manners," Mary said absently, "in walking into a lady's room unchaperoned."
"/You/ lecture me on etiquette?"
"Who else will be rude enough to tell you that you are being rude?"
"Touché. But tell me about this new project of yours. " Colin sat down and poked at one of the many envelopes lying scattered on the floor.
"Not new, but old. I've decided to return to gardening." She looked up at him and met his eyes, which were still large and gray and strangely luminous. An unspoken thought passed between them, and he nodded.
"When are you leaving?" she asked, bending her head over a packet labeled /Rosa damascena/.
"In a week. You shan't be lonely, here in the manor by yourself?"
"Don't be silly," she said. "And you?"
He laughed. "Why would I be lonely at Oxford?"
"Don't be silly," she repeated. She deftly wrapped up the packet she had been examining with a faded hair ribbon and handed it to him.
Beneath the packet, a heavy metal key. He touched its warm, polished surface. "Mary," he began, then halted.
"You once said you would become a magician," she said matter-of-factly. "A reminder to keep your promises."
He held the key, the small packet of seeds, tightly in his palms, against his heart.
END
Yours &c.
Post-script: From
ellen_kushner, "Baby Got Back" done 19th cen. style here. Which reminds me, I also came across
ladysisyphus' The Waste Land rendition of HBP the other day: Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Poet. Read it now!
Post-post-script: I read an obscure early novel of Burnett's, several days ago, on Project Gutenberg, called His Grace of Osmonde. I've concluded since that the reason why I believe The Secret Garden to be her best book is because its characters are the most imperfect.
Cutting it even more close. I'm in a verbose mood lately. Also, I think I grossly mischaracterized Mary and Colin here. Oh, will the desecration of childhood classics never end, etc., etc., etc.
A Reminder
Dedicated to
Mistress Mary, quite contrary, grown ever more eccentric with age. As a young lady of sixteen, with her hair up and her skirts long, she insisted on muddying her boots and the hem of her petticoats while walking on the moors on a damp Sunday morning--"I forgot the smell of growing things," she informed her distraught maid--and on picking locks to closed-off rooms, a skill she had acquired under Colin's tutelage, who in turn had learned it at boarding school.
"Miss Mary," Colin said teasingly, as he walked into her sitting room--she was now old enough to have such little luxuries, although it must be admitted that she spent very little time sitting in it--without knocking. He hardly paused at the sight of his cousin sprawled out on the floor examining seeds with a magnifying glass. "I hear that you've taken up natural history."
"One would wonder at your lack of manners," Mary said absently, "in walking into a lady's room unchaperoned."
"/You/ lecture me on etiquette?"
"Who else will be rude enough to tell you that you are being rude?"
"Touché. But tell me about this new project of yours. " Colin sat down and poked at one of the many envelopes lying scattered on the floor.
"Not new, but old. I've decided to return to gardening." She looked up at him and met his eyes, which were still large and gray and strangely luminous. An unspoken thought passed between them, and he nodded.
"When are you leaving?" she asked, bending her head over a packet labeled /Rosa damascena/.
"In a week. You shan't be lonely, here in the manor by yourself?"
"Don't be silly," she said. "And you?"
He laughed. "Why would I be lonely at Oxford?"
"Don't be silly," she repeated. She deftly wrapped up the packet she had been examining with a faded hair ribbon and handed it to him.
Beneath the packet, a heavy metal key. He touched its warm, polished surface. "Mary," he began, then halted.
"You once said you would become a magician," she said matter-of-factly. "A reminder to keep your promises."
He held the key, the small packet of seeds, tightly in his palms, against his heart.
END
Yours &c.
Post-script: From
Post-post-script: I read an obscure early novel of Burnett's, several days ago, on Project Gutenberg, called His Grace of Osmonde. I've concluded since that the reason why I believe The Secret Garden to be her best book is because its characters are the most imperfect.
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Date: 2005-08-20 04:12 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2005-08-20 04:27 am (UTC)OMG. You wrote The Secret Garden fic! *squees* And this is wonderful!
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Date: 2005-08-20 04:50 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-08-20 05:03 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-08-20 04:37 am (UTC)Can I friend you?
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Date: 2005-08-20 04:53 am (UTC)(And yes, the HBP version Eliot is sheer brilliance! I hope they post up footnotes too. XD)
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Date: 2005-08-20 05:04 am (UTC)(That was so MARY and in such a good way and...*flails*)
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Date: 2005-08-20 01:26 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-08-20 05:44 am (UTC)I should comment on your fic more, but I keep forgetting. =_=; The Ichigo/RUkia one was <33333 as well.
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Date: 2005-08-20 01:28 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-08-20 02:40 pm (UTC)That was beautiful. Thank you for writing.
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Date: 2005-08-20 05:11 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-08-23 08:21 pm (UTC)