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DeWolfe Apts., on the Feast of St. John Eudes

Cutting it even more close. I'm in a verbose mood lately. Also, I think I grossly mischaracterized Mary and Colin here. Oh, will the desecration of childhood classics never end, etc., etc., etc.

A Reminder
Dedicated to [livejournal.com profile] serendip, because Mary's voice really belongs to her Ginny

Mistress Mary, quite contrary, grown ever more eccentric with age. As a young lady of sixteen, with her hair up and her skirts long, she insisted on muddying her boots and the hem of her petticoats while walking on the moors on a damp Sunday morning--"I forgot the smell of growing things," she informed her distraught maid--and on picking locks to closed-off rooms, a skill she had acquired under Colin's tutelage, who in turn had learned it at boarding school.

"Miss Mary," Colin said teasingly, as he walked into her sitting room--she was now old enough to have such little luxuries, although it must be admitted that she spent very little time sitting in it--without knocking. He hardly paused at the sight of his cousin sprawled out on the floor examining seeds with a magnifying glass. "I hear that you've taken up natural history."

"One would wonder at your lack of manners," Mary said absently, "in walking into a lady's room unchaperoned."

"/You/ lecture me on etiquette?"

"Who else will be rude enough to tell you that you are being rude?"

"Touché. But tell me about this new project of yours. " Colin sat down and poked at one of the many envelopes lying scattered on the floor.

"Not new, but old. I've decided to return to gardening." She looked up at him and met his eyes, which were still large and gray and strangely luminous. An unspoken thought passed between them, and he nodded.

"When are you leaving?" she asked, bending her head over a packet labeled /Rosa damascena/.

"In a week. You shan't be lonely, here in the manor by yourself?"

"Don't be silly," she said. "And you?"

He laughed. "Why would I be lonely at Oxford?"

"Don't be silly," she repeated. She deftly wrapped up the packet she had been examining with a faded hair ribbon and handed it to him.

Beneath the packet, a heavy metal key. He touched its warm, polished surface. "Mary," he began, then halted.

"You once said you would become a magician," she said matter-of-factly. "A reminder to keep your promises."

He held the key, the small packet of seeds, tightly in his palms, against his heart.

END

Yours &c.

Post-script: From [livejournal.com profile] ellen_kushner, "Baby Got Back" done 19th cen. style here. Which reminds me, I also came across [livejournal.com profile] ladysisyphus' The Waste Land rendition of HBP the other day: Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Poet. Read it now!

Post-post-script: I read an obscure early novel of Burnett's, several days ago, on Project Gutenberg, called His Grace of Osmonde. I've concluded since that the reason why I believe The Secret Garden to be her best book is because its characters are the most imperfect.

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Date: 2005-08-20 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lazulisong.livejournal.com
that is FULL OF AWESOME. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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Date: 2005-08-20 04:49 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
Hee, children's lit = LOVE. XD Thanks~!

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Date: 2005-08-20 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] svz-insanity.livejournal.com
I second Meg.

OMG. You wrote The Secret Garden fic! *squees* And this is wonderful!

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Date: 2005-08-20 04:50 am (UTC)
troisroyaumes: Painting of a duck, with the hanzi for "summer" in the top left (Default)
From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
Wah, very glad you liked! The Secret Garden is one of the most reread books on my shelf, and I couldn't resist writing for it. ^_^;;

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Date: 2005-08-20 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] svz-insanity.livejournal.com
^^; I reread it twice a year-- usually in the winter and in the spring. *is such a dork*

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Date: 2005-08-20 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittu9.livejournal.com
I'm running out of words for how awesome this is. ^_^ Children's lit fanfiction! (and the HBP Wasteland link? pure genuis, thanks for sharing.)

Can I friend you?

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Date: 2005-08-20 04:53 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
::blushes:: Of course! I must friend you back, considering how often I go to your LJ to look for fic. ^_^

(And yes, the HBP version Eliot is sheer brilliance! I hope they post up footnotes too. XD)

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Date: 2005-08-20 05:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cynic-in-charge.livejournal.com
This was lovely and gorgeous so very very <33333333333333333333. Am speechless, but in such a good way.

(That was so MARY and in such a good way and...*flails*)

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Date: 2005-08-20 01:26 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
Yay! I'm so glad to hear it sounds like Mary. I suddenly had this image of the older her, as perverse as ever albeit more mature, and I wondered if that would only make sense to me or not. ^_^;; Thank you for commenting~!

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Date: 2005-08-20 05:44 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lacewood
The ending is <33333. I needed a minute before my brain could connect older!Mary to the book, but now that it has, it fits. <3

I should comment on your fic more, but I keep forgetting. =_=; The Ichigo/RUkia one was <33333 as well.

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Date: 2005-08-20 01:28 pm (UTC)
troisroyaumes: Painting of a duck, with the hanzi for "summer" in the top left (Default)
From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
Yay, thank you for commenting! I'm glad to hear it fits; I did worry that it wouldn't connect to the younger Mary in the book. ^_^ And even happier to hear that you liked the Ichigo/Rukia fic--your fics for the pairing went a long way in determining my image of the characters. XD

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Date: 2005-08-20 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karabana.livejournal.com
*loves*

That was beautiful. Thank you for writing.

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Date: 2005-08-20 05:11 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
And thank you for commenting! ^____^

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Date: 2005-08-23 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aetherangelette.livejournal.com
I like! xD I like this writing tone, too. Though I was left rereading the end as I felt that I missed something (which I did) and trying to understand exactly what was going on >_>

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