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DeWolfe Apts., on the Memorial of the Queenship of Mary

A short, pointless mood piece. O_O

Dance
Dedicated to [livejournal.com profile] delentyevox for persuading me to read Rurouni Kenshin

Their first night, she did not close the sliding doors, but left them parted to allow a finger's width of moonlight to fall into the room, illuminating the bright crimson edge of her kimono. The hem touched the floor, tracing along it like a pool of blood. He watched it weave back and forth following the arches of her feet, which stepped to some invisible pattern.

She raised one arm, letting a long sleeve fall back from the white line of her wrist. In her other hand, a fan opened, fold by fold, a curve to hide her face, except for her dark, unreadable eyes that glanced at him sideways. His breath caught; he leaned forward. She seemed unrecognizable, this frozen silhouette, elegant, impenetrable. He wanted to lower the fan from her half-hidden face, but held himself still.

She slid a foot forward; he saw the barest trace of a slender ankle. She tilted her head; he glimpsed the elaborate arrangement of her hair. She arched her arm toward the ceiling; he watched the sleeve fall inch by inch exposing soft, luminescent skin. He could hear his heartbeat, loud and ragged against her silence.

One step, two--the fan fell. He rose to his feet and embraced her before she could slip back into intangible mystery. Her tense body, solid and warm, in his arms.

END

Yours &c.

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Date: 2005-08-23 08:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schwimmerin.livejournal.com
A totally non-eloquent comment to your exceptionally eloquent story: h0tt!!!

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Date: 2005-08-24 01:41 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
Hahahaha, yes, my subconscious seems to be preoccupied with sex lately. XD

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Date: 2005-08-23 08:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rhoe.livejournal.com
Wow. Vivid descriptions. <333

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Date: 2005-08-24 01:42 am (UTC)
troisroyaumes: Painting of a duck, with the hanzi for "summer" in the top left (Default)
From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
Thank you! ^_^

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Date: 2005-08-23 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittu9.livejournal.com
He rose to his feet and embraced her before she could slip back into intangible mystery. Her tense body, solid and warm, in his arms. <-- This is utterly, utterly beautiful. Too often, Kaoru is portrayed with uncertainty or clumsiness. You have given her that delicate, fluttering sweetness that Kenshin sees her with.

Or, alternatively: I <3 your fic, especially that "intangible mystery" line. 'guh' worthy. ^_^

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Date: 2005-08-24 01:43 am (UTC)
troisroyaumes: Painting of a duck, with the hanzi for "summer" in the top left (Default)
From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
Yes, I think the reason why I like the pairing is because of the way Kaoru is always so lovely to Kenshin's eyes. ^_^ I'm so glad you liked it!

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Date: 2005-08-23 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
All right, well, now you have persuaded me to try out Rurouni Kenshin myself. This fic is beautiful, I adore the descriptions, and at one point - he saw the barest trace of a slender ankle - my heart just melted. I had some trouble cleaning up the pile of goo that it turned into before reading it all.

The whole thing is just. Squee.

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Date: 2005-08-23 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clocklike.livejournal.com
Oops, that was my comment, Tari. XD

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Date: 2005-08-24 01:45 am (UTC)
troisroyaumes: Painting of a duck, with the hanzi for "summer" in the top left (Default)
From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
Yay, I persuaded you to read another series! I think you would like it a lot actually. ^_^ I'm very glad you liked the fic! <3

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Date: 2005-08-23 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aetherangelette.livejournal.com
The hem touched the floor, tracing along it like a pool of blood. <-- my favorite image ... along with the moonlight one... xD

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Date: 2005-08-24 01:45 am (UTC)
troisroyaumes: Painting of a duck, with the hanzi for "summer" in the top left (Default)
From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
Heh, thanks 'niichan. XD

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Date: 2005-08-24 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cynic-in-charge.livejournal.com
<3333333 This is lovely and heartbreaking and the description is just so wunderbar. *#%&)#@*%& I cannot be coherent, forgive me.

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Date: 2005-08-24 01:47 am (UTC)
troisroyaumes: Painting of a duck, with the hanzi for "summer" in the top left (Default)
From: [personal profile] troisroyaumes
You're forgiven of course as long as you keep writing more Yuuko fic. ^_^;; Thank you~!

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